"How To Write A Damn
Good Story Online"

lo-blacksuit-med-200x234It was about 4pm on a Thursday and I was on a giddy high.

I'd just been cast as a servant girl in an updated version of "Romeo & Juliet." (Pretty shabby rendition but then again, who remakes Shakespeare?)

My girlfriend, who also auditioned, didn't get cast. (What was her name again?) I drove the two of us to the audition and on the way home, the energy from the passenger side was a little chilly.

But to me, the trees waved congratulations in the breeze. The air smelled a little cleaner. My scalp was actually tingly.

Then just like that, it all changed.

At the intersection of Sunshine Terrace & Laurel Canyon a car made a left in front of us.

SLAM! CRUNCH! SHATTER! (Insert more "Batman" sounds here.)

My dirty Datsun had had its last bath. It was totaled.

Fortunately my friend (what WAS her name?) and I were able to walk away with only soft tissue damage.

In the weirdest way you could say that car accident birthed my company, Red Hot Copy.

See I ended up marrying my lawyer and having two sons with him. And I ultimately built my business so I could raise them from home while still working after we divorced.

What about you?

How do you get into your business? Do you have a story inside waiting to get out? Of course you do!

Let your inner storyteller come out & play…


Ever since we were cave folks gathered around the campfire, swapping tales of our heroic wins (and our humiliating losses), story has been important in our world. To survive harsh environments the human brain categorizes everything. It's constantly scanning the world for commonalities. So when a story is told, the natural response is for humans to apply that story to their own experiences. Get it? Stories create instant bonds and spark emotional connection. Stories also boost your credibility. To move people into action, you need a good story. But it takes practice to crank out captivating tales.

Stories can RIVET your audience…
when you know what you're doing…

We all know how to tell stories. You're a natural. Really you are.

Some people are a little better at it though. And that's no accident.

Something gets triggered in those people.

It could be partly genetics. It might be that they're astute observers. Or it could be they learned to repeat the patterns of story that makes their audience eager to lap up their next detail.

Today more than ever stories are the gems that get your writing noticed. I'm talking about all kinds of writing...blogs, emails, even your book promotions. There's just too much competition for attention for us to take it all in.

But weaving together a marketing story that keeps your reader glued to your message takes a little more finesse. That's why I put together my step-by-step system to getting good at storytelling really fast.

The promise is right there in the title: "How to Write a Damn Good Story Online." And that's just what you're gonna do.

"How to Write a Damn Good Story Online"


When you purchase, you get access to my savvy step-by-step system (check out the alliteration!) for telling powerful stories that sell. Once you see how I do it, you'll be able to repeat it on your own over and over again.

But to make sure you feel confident to do this yourself after this training is over, you also get the fill-in-the-blank Red Hot Storytelling Template ($37 value) .

And, what the heck...I've found that the 21 Hooks That Work for Any Market ($37 value) has helped me get out of more than one jam when in the past when I was looking for an angle. You can have it when you purchase also.

Here are even more bonuses you get with this burgeoning package:

Red Hot Picture Prompt Percolator (PDF) - This imaginative collection of story prompts will activate your senses and your creativity. ($37 value)

Powerful Storytelling for Web 2.0 with Kate Yandoh (Audio/PDF Transcript) - Former Coca-cola marketer joins me in this info-packed interview that pulls back the curtain to moving people to action with a good story. ($67 value)

Hypnotic Storytelling with Dr. Harlan Kilstein (Audio/PDF Transcript) - This rousing interview investigates how NLP (Neuro Linguistic Programming) can be used to unconsciously turn our readers into buyers. ($67 value)

Four Stories to Use on Your Website by Cathy Goodwin, Ph.D. - Storytelling is the Swiss army knife for copywriters and marketers:  every aspect of your marketing will be more efficient - and easier - when you do it with stories. With this report, you'll know exactly what stories to tell, when and why. - ($37 value)

That's $245 in free bonuses to add rocket fuel to this already power-packed course.

By the way, if you're not happy with this training, I'm not happy. I really want you to understand how to use story in your business. So if you check this out and still don't find the value, by all means, please let us know within 30 days of your purchase. We'll return your investment with zero hassle.

Let me help you unleash your creativity and get those stories working for you!




YES, Lorrie! I want the video presentation and downloadable document of "How to Write a Damn Good Story Online" for only $197 Special NOW Only $47. I understand that I will get a copy of the video, the slides, and these free bonuses:

    • Fill-in-the-blank Red Hot Storytelling Template ($37 value)


    • 21 Hooks That Work for Any Market ($37 value)


    • Red Hot Picture Prompt Percolator - ($37 value)


    • Powerful Storytelling for Web 2.0 with Kate Yandoh - ($67 value)


    • Hypnotic Storytelling with Dr. Harlan Kilstein - ($67 value)


    • Four Stories to Use on Your Website by Cathy Goodwin, Ph.D. - ($37 value)



If I'm not satisfied with what I learn, I understand I can request a no-hassle refund after 30 days of my purchase so I risk nothing. I can't wait to learn your process for writing compelling business stories.